今天,我们一起来看羊驼教研组老师讲解的PTE写作SWT题的例题:Sochi Olympic Games,这一篇其实算是一个旧题,同学们自己花时间看一下这篇文章,以及自己先去画一画哪一些是关键句,待会老师讲的时候,也会更加有代入感。
一、PTE写作SWT题的原文
11 February 2009 Major athletic events around the globe from the 2014 Sochi Olympics to an annual powerboat race in Norwegian fjords are striving to neutralize their carbon footprint as part of a worldwide climate network, the United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) said today.The sporting events are the latest participants to join the network, and are particularly important for inspiring further global action on the environment, said Achim Steiner, UNEP Executive Director.
Organizers of the 2014 Sochi Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games to be held in a unique natural setting between the shores of the Black Sea and the soaring snow-capped Caucasus Mountains say they will put an estimated $1.75 billion into energy conservation and renewable energy.
That investment will be dedicated to improving transport infrastructure, offsetting greenhouse gas emissions from the use of electricity, air travel and ground transportation, the reforestation of Sochi National Park and the development of green belts in the city.
二、PTE写作SWT题的答案
The United Nations Environment Program said athletic events around the globe are striving to neutralize their carbon footprint as part of a worldwide climate network, so sporting events are important for inspiring further global action on the environment, but organizers of 2014 Sochi Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games will invest into energy conservation and renewable energy, dedicating to improving transport infrastructure, offsetting greenhouse gas emissions, the reforestation and the development of green belts. (73 words)
三、PTE写作SWT题的翻译
联合国环境规划署(UNEP)今天表示,作为全球气候网络的一部分,从2014年索契奥运会到每年在挪威峡湾举行的汽艇比赛等全球主要体育赛事都在努力消除其碳足迹。
11 February 2009 Major athletic events around the globe from the 2014 Sochi Olympics to an annual powerboat race in Norwegian fjords are striving to neutralize their carbon footprint as part of a worldwide climate network, the United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) said today.
联合国环境规划署执行主任阿希姆·施泰纳说,体育赛事是该网络的最新参与者,对于激励进一步的全球环境行动尤为重要。
The sporting events are the latest participants to join the network, and are particularly important for inspiring further global action on the environment, said Achim Steiner, UNEP Executive Director.
2014年索契冬奥会和冬残奥会将在黑海沿岸和白雪皑皑的高加索山脉之间独特的自然环境中举行。索契冬奥会的组织者说,他们将投入大约17.5亿美元用于节能和可再生能源。
Organizers of the 2014 Sochi Olympic and Paralympic Winter Games to be held in a unique natural setting between the shores of the Black Sea and the soaring snow-capped Caucasus Mountains say they will put an estimated $1.75 billion into energy conservation and renewable energy.
这笔投资将用于改善交通基础设施,抵消电力使用、航空旅行和地面交通产生的温室气体排放,以及索契国家公园(Sochi National Park)的重新造林和城市绿化带的发展。
That investment will be dedicated to improving transport infrastructure, offsetting greenhouse gas emissions from the use of electricity, air travel and ground transportation, the reforestation of Sochi National Park and the development of green belts in the city.
四、PTE写作SWT题的解析
1、这篇文章整体来说是一个三段的结构,我们依次来往下看。首先我们看开头部分,在这个时间段有这么多major athletic events是来自于全球范围内,不管是2014年奥运会,还是说这种年度的赛事在哪里举行。我们直接来看主干部分,他们其实是想尽全力去消除,或者是减少碳排放,Carbon footprint, 碳足迹。他们被当做一个全球范围内关于气候的联系网。这是谁提出来的,就是这样一个组织。A particularly important,这个咱们需要画出来,For inspiring a further global action on the environment, 关于他们可以鼓励之后的在全球范围内的关于环境方面的一些行动。
2、接下来我们看一下第二段,具体来说索奥运会,以及之后的残奥会,这些方面他们是怎么做的,首先呢,他们是在哪里举行,在一个白雪皑皑的山脉,具体这个地点不重要。Into energy and conservation and renewable energy, 最后一段更加细节,这些投资具体投在了哪些方面,怎么去提高的,improving the transport greenhouse gas emissions,把哪些地方的温室气体的排放减下来,就是它从哪些地方来节能。接下来就是要做那种再造的森林。以及of green bells in the city, 我们黄色画出来的部分,就是每一段或整体来说比较重要的部分,就用连接词把它们连成一句话。